I listened to the version at your youtube page before I could give you a precise review.
I don't like how the song fades in when it starts. It would sound more of a professional single if you changed the beginning into a build up. For the record, the "spoon sound" of the perc you used sounds good. I liked it from the beginning.
The chorus was pretty awesome. you didn't let it die, but keep me tuned in. The build up and anticipation for the song to come out of chorus was very good.
I liked how you let it break down towards the end rather then take the lazy way out and fade it out.
great thx i personnaly share your opinion when i relisten to it , wich helps me for further songs usually. Ill probably rework on this song to make it more dancy, like club trance. Thx for review
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